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Critique please - MFF cover concept #1by =13MARISA

Traditional Art / Drawings / Illustration / Conceptual

edit: the wolf aren't flyng, just hanging in the air. I need to know your meaning how the wings should be then.
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PLEASE CRITIQUE! I need canine anatomy corrections, please! c: This is just a very easy & quick sketch, please don't point out art correction but ANATOMY correction xD the same for the wings.

This is concept #1 for the cover for Madi's Following Future, but I still need to figure out what should be in the background.

Enjoy this crappy piece of art!

Art © me

Critique by ~DevilsDesigns Dec 2, 2012, 2:13:07 PM

This is great! But to say the truth I wouldnt let the wolf's feet and under body just hang...I would make the wolf 'work', more like trying to keep it's body up and make it kinda look like he's/she's leaping. Also his/her head is just hanging there and he/she looks like he/she is think 'When will i ever reach (were ever he/she want to go to) Other than all those bad things I'm saying i think the idea and everything is just great! I love the way you did the paws and the tail and the wings! I realy hope I don't sound to mean

I'm just trying to help you a bit with my opinion

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Critique by ~Lynxs58 Dec 2, 2012, 10:26:38 AM

The wolf anatomy looks great, but the wings don't. ^^" I don't want to mean, but uh.. That's what critiques are for.

I suggest you look at this: [link]

It really helped me! And I would not know how to explain it myself... Heh, but the wolf looks great. Just, you know, details.

If you want to look at some kind of wolf tutorial there is also [link]

I think you did a great job on the front view of the wolf, I don't think the tail would come between his/her's legs while flying. The limbs look great shape, minus the details. I hope this helped you. q-q

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=Wonderer1000 Dec 4, 2012

good work!

=13MARISA Dec 5, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

thanks C:

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~HowlingSara2000 Dec 3, 2012

wow.... in my opinion... its very well drawn!!! that picture is very difficult to draw, and is very acurate!!! like it.

=13MARISA Dec 3, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

thank you very much for your comment c:

~The-Machine-Worker Dec 2, 2012 Hobbyist

I would suggest using more references for the wings the next time. The feathers are misplaced and where the wing connects to the body would it be absolutely impossible for a wolf to fly with wings placed like that, they have to be thicker and bigger.

As a positive thing; Your paws are getting better.

=13MARISA Dec 2, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

thanks a lot c:
I was very unsure how the wings should be, if the wolf is just hanging in the air, not flying (I am sorry I didn't say that before).

But thanks a lot! c: It does help! c:

~The-Machine-Worker Dec 2, 2012 Hobbyist

Welcome!

Even if it was just hanging wouldn't it really matter, because what kind of creature would have wings just for the design?

Glad to help.

=13MARISA Dec 3, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Hahahaha, the idea with the wings is because the story of the comic. I had the plans of low opacity wings that we could see through. I hope you understand c:

I am grateful c:

~The-Machine-Worker Dec 3, 2012 Hobbyist

Well well. It's your art!

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